शायद जिन्दगी को किसी नई परिभाषा से परिभाषित कर रही हैं। कविता हमारे रोज-मर्रा में होने वाले छोटे-छोटे हादसो की ओर इंगित कर रही है जो, कि जख्मों की गांठ खोल तो देते है फिर उन्हें भरने के लिये लंबा इंतजार करना पड़ता है।
जीवन की चुभन / सिहरन को एक नया आयाम देति कविता, बधाईयाँ.
जब भी कोई जख्म उधड़ता है तो रिसने लगता है, वो कौन सी याद होगी, बात होगी, जो इस रिसाव का सबब बनें और चुप सी रातों में परेशान करें, यादों के सायें। वक्त कैसे खड़ा देख सकता है जख्मों को बहते हुए। कभी पकड़ कर इस वक्त के साये को पुछना बता तो मेरा दोष क्या था।
Have a history teacher explain this----- if they can.
Abraham Lincoln was elected to Congress in 1846. John F. Kennedy was elected to Congress in 1946.
Abraham Lincoln was elected President in 1860. John F. Kennedy was elected President in 1960.
Both were particularly concerned with civil rights. Both wives lost their children while living in the White House.
Both Presidents were shot on a Friday. Both Presidents were shot in the head
Now it gets really weird.
Lincoln 's secretary was named Kennedy. Kennedy's Secretary was named Lincoln .
Both were assassinated by Southerners. Both were succeeded by Southerners named Johnson.
Andrew Johnson, who succeeded Lincoln , was born in 1808. Lyndon Johnson, who succeeded Kennedy, was born in 1908.
John Wilkes Booth, who assassinated Lincoln , was born in 1839. Lee Harvey Oswald, who assassinated Kennedy, was born in 1939.
Both assassins were known by their three names. Both names are composed of fifteen letters.
Now hang on to your seat.
Lincoln was shot at the theater named 'Ford.' Kennedy was shot in a car called ' Lincoln ' made by 'Ford.'
Lincoln was shot in a theater and hi s assassin ran and hid in a warehouse. Kennedy was shot from a warehouse and his assassin ran and hid in a theater.
Booth and Oswald were assassinated before their trials.
And here's the kicker...
A week before Lincoln was shot, he was in Monroe , Maryland A week before Kennedy was shot, he was with Marilyn Monroe.
shayad ab jakhm ko silane ki jaroorat nahi rahi ho kyon ki kuchh jakham ek samay antaral ke baad dard nahi dete hain. Achchhi rachana lagi aapki. Dhanyawad Navnit Nirav
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खूबसूरत
उसने जख्मों से धागा निकाल दिया....
मनविंदर जी,
शायद जिन्दगी को किसी नई परिभाषा से परिभाषित कर रही हैं। कविता हमारे रोज-मर्रा में होने वाले छोटे-छोटे हादसो की ओर इंगित कर रही है जो, कि जख्मों की गांठ खोल तो देते है फिर उन्हें भरने के लिये लंबा इंतजार करना पड़ता है।
जीवन की चुभन / सिहरन को एक नया आयाम देति कविता, बधाईयाँ.
मुकेश कुमार तिवारी
अद्भुत......!
dard men lipta ek zakhm.
बहुत बढ़िया अभिव्यक्ति
क्या कहूं ? बहुत खूबसूरत पंक्तियाँ हैं. जीवन का मर्म है.
बहुत गहरी रचना है।
बहुत ही दिल से निकली रचना है...धन्यवाद..
DARD KO BHI KIS BEHATARI AUR KHUBSURATI SE PESH KARI JAA SAKTI HAI KOI AAP SE SIKHE... BAHOT BAHOT BADHAAYEE AAPKO...
ARSH
गजब। बहुत कम शब्दों बहुत कुछ कह दिया।
bahut khoob surati se dil ko chhoo gaye apki kavita abhar
जब भी कोई जख्म उधड़ता है तो रिसने लगता है, वो कौन सी याद होगी, बात होगी, जो इस रिसाव का सबब बनें और चुप सी रातों में परेशान करें, यादों के सायें। वक्त कैसे खड़ा देख सकता है जख्मों को बहते हुए। कभी पकड़ कर इस वक्त के साये को पुछना बता तो मेरा दोष क्या था।
शब्दों के माध्यम से बहुर गहरी बात.......अक्सर दर्द का कोई तनका अचानक खोल कर भीड़ मैं गम हो जाता है लाजवाब.........
Can anyone explain this one?
WEIRD!! RH
History Mystery
Have a history teacher explain this----- if they can.
Abraham Lincoln was elected to Congress in 1846.
John F. Kennedy was elected to Congress in 1946.
Abraham Lincoln was elected President in 1860.
John F. Kennedy was elected President in 1960.
Both were particularly concerned with civil rights.
Both wives lost their children while living in the White House.
Both Presidents were shot on a Friday.
Both Presidents were shot in the head
Now it gets really weird.
Lincoln 's secretary was named Kennedy.
Kennedy's Secretary was named Lincoln .
Both were assassinated by Southerners.
Both were succeeded by Southerners named Johnson.
Andrew Johnson, who succeeded Lincoln , was born in 1808.
Lyndon Johnson, who succeeded Kennedy, was born in 1908.
John Wilkes Booth, who assassinated Lincoln , was born in 1839.
Lee Harvey Oswald, who assassinated Kennedy, was born in 1939.
Both assassins were known by their three names.
Both names are composed of fifteen letters.
Now hang on to your seat.
Lincoln was shot at the theater named 'Ford.'
Kennedy was shot in a car called ' Lincoln ' made by 'Ford.'
Lincoln was shot in a theater and hi s assassin ran and hid in a warehouse.
Kennedy was shot from a warehouse and his assassin ran and hid in a theater.
Booth and Oswald were assassinated before their trials.
And here's the kicker...
A week before Lincoln was shot, he was in Monroe , Maryland
A week before Kennedy was shot, he was with Marilyn Monroe.
shayad ab jakhm ko silane ki jaroorat nahi rahi ho kyon ki kuchh jakham ek samay antaral ke baad dard nahi dete hain.
Achchhi rachana lagi aapki.
Dhanyawad
Navnit Nirav
रात की खामोशी मे कभी कभी ऐसा भी होता है
किसी का जख्म खुल जाता है कोई चादर ओढ़कर सो जाता है
मनविंदर जी, इरशाद भाई के ब्लॉग पर आपके बारे में विस्तार से पढा अच्छा लगा। बहुत बहुत बधाई।
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TSALIIM.
-SBAI-
दिल को छूती रचना पेश की है आपने मनविंदर जी बेहतरीन रचना
manvindar ji ,
main kya kahun .. aapne to nishabd kar diya .. main chupchaap is nazm ko padh raha hoon ..
abhi kuch soojh nahi raha hai .. kya likhun ,kya kahun..
bus aapki lekhan ko salaam karta hoon ..
विजय
http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com
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आभार
uffff.... ! dhage khinchane ki sarr si awaaz aur zakhm khulane se hua dard...! sab jaise khud pe aa gaya.
Bahut hi lajawab rachna hai...
उसने जख्मों से धागा निकाल दिया
वक्त खड़ा देखता रहा खुले जख्म को
और साया रेले में गुम हो गया
lajwab rachna hai...
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